Part E : Next, write briefly about how you revised your essay, addressing the following points: Did you revise certain sections of the explication What was the reasoning behind your decision to revise those sections ? do you feel about the results of the revisions ? Analyze your choices in revision based on the checklist . How does your essay align with the revision checklist? Type your response in the space provided. Using the poem The World is Too Much.

government played the key role in promoting industrialization in russia while individual businesses played a larger role in great britain. or for apex a

the answer should be the first one. "many people find his lyrics very moving."

it by far makes the most grammatical sense and is very objective, removing any first person from the original sentence and keeping with the sentence fluency.

they both lost a woman they loved named lenore

they believed they interracted with a talking raven

they became orphaned at a young age.