Y CIVIL
Fill in the blanks to complete a
summary of this passage.
A girl named Nisha rescues
Neel. Nisha is a fan of Neel's
grandfather's work with
elephants . Nisha brings Neel to
the back of her neck. "Do you think you could introduce me
to your grandfather?"
Neel peered at the tablet's screen, which displayed a
copy of My Friends, the Asian Elephants by Chandra
Tripathi.
"I've read his book at least ten times," blushed Nisha.
Neel nodded, laughing. What were the odds of his
rescuer being a fan of his grandfather's work?
When they arrived at the lab, the lead custodian
contacted Neel's group aboard the hovercraft and was
informed that they'd pick him up in thirty minutes. In the
meantime, Neel connected with Nana using the lab's
communication system.
"Nana, this is Nisha, and she's looking after your
elephants!" Neel said. "We captured a holo of one of them.
a special elephant, just for you."
As Neel's grandfather smiled warmly on the screen,
Nisha beamed. "I hope I will make you proud, sir."
Neel's grandfather nodded. "You already do...both of
you."
a research lab. There, Neel's group is
contacted, and they will come
pick him up
. While he waits,
Neel uses a communications system to
talk to his grandfather
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i think you should write from the heart and think what truely makes a hero. i can’t do this for you. even though this is it’s up to you.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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should you be the one doing this journal entry? it says "your special talent or skill". are you gonna lie 'bout your talent and make us fake a talent for you?

also this is a really easy journal entry, you can just think of a skill your good at and write did you work hard to become good at this skill (ex: drawing, writing, math, playing music, etc.) or does it come naturally (like a cool trick that you can do with your body). you can do all of that in 150 words. just try and think of a talent and even if your bad at this talent just say your working hard to become good at it.

a personal narrative essay is about a personal experience, so it is usually written in the first person. to maximize its impact, the essay should: be written to have an emotional impact on the reader. include a lot of references to sensory perceptions and hope i