Hello! i am writing book, and so far i think it is pretty good, and help would be nice!
no name for the book yet btw.

Like any other day, I wake up at 6:48a. m. by my mother, after my alarm has gone off at 6:45 a. m. I brush my teeth, get ready for school, and go downstairs for breakfast. My father is the first one up so he can get ready for work. He is a lawyer and is sitting opposite sides from my little brother Danny. Danny is only 4 years old, he thinks he is the boss, loves to play baseball, but loves even more the annoy the heck out of me.

My mother makes breakfast everyday on a school day, she works at home, so she can watch over danny. That is because she doesn’t trust preschool teachers. I never understood why of course, they look so nice and caring. Then there was me, I am Hannah Arch, 16 years old. I have blond hair, and beautiful blue eyes. I am 5 foot 5, skinny , and nothing different than the regular girl.