Will someone help me with my grammar in this short essay i wrote please its for school...
I’m 16 years old I lived in Phoenix till I was 13 Phoenix is very sunny with a lot of palm trees it can be very hot almost up to 100 degrees and over when I went to Tuscano Elementary School it was alright and for middle school I went to Western Valley Middle School it was okay i went there for 2 years.
I did online school for a short while and switched to public school again at Marionneaux Elementary/ middle School it was really nice i made a lot of friends then for high school for freshman year i went to Buckeye Union High School i liked it alot my friends from my middle school were there and the teachers were fun then i switched to Youngker High School to see what it was like it was good i liked the teachers and i made some friends then i switched to Pennfoster High School and i like it so far it’s helping me learn easier at home because it’s quiet and i can focus easier and learn more.
This year so far is good i’m learning a lot and communicating more with people and my baby brother Rudy was born on jan 21,2020 he’s chubby and super cute he likes to move a lot i help out with him a lot and i help around the house a lot more because my older brother is sick and my baby brother is always with my mom so she has a lot of work to do with him.
my hobbies are i like to listen to music i like all types of music my favorites are My Chemical Romance, Bring Me The Horizon and Melanie Martinez my favorite songs are mostly from My Chemical Romance though.
But I also like to read stories online or read a book from the library my favorite book genres are Horror Fiction, Mystery, Comics and Fantasy. My favorite authors are Stephen King and J. K. Rowling i like Horror Fiction because you never know what’s coming next and I like adventure i also like Mystery for the same reason and i like comics because i can see the pictures of the characters and how the author wanted them to look and i like to see the scenery in the Comic but i also like to imagine what the characters would look like in my mind so i read books alot of the time.
Video games are also fun i like to play roblox and play on Xbox sometimes my favorite type of games are Fantasy, survival Horror, Action and survival games i like survival cause it’s fun trying to figure stuff out and learn more about the game well having fun and fantasy is also fun cause the characters don’t have to be human you can make them whatever you want them to be so it makes it more fun and exciting.
I like to also search things up when i’m not doing anything like careers i might want to do i don’t think i’ve fully decided yet though because they’re are so many things i would like to do i don’t really like to stick to one thing i like to explore new ideas and try new things i really wanna travel though for sure because i want to see different places other than where i live like Georgia, Maine, Washington and Maryland because they are green places and i like nature and i like the houses and how they aren't the same.
I feel like i’m a very introverted person i don’t talk a lot unless i have to and when i do it has to be with a really good friend i also feel like i have a big imagination and i’m constantly thinking of new thing or trying to figure things out i like to be independent and i’m always trying to improve myself and i can be determined if i really want to do something or if it seems interesting i like to analyze new things i see and old to learn more.
I like to wear comfortable clothes like shorts and a big t-shirt i like to also wear pants with a big t-shirt i don’t like wearing dresses or skirts cause they are extremely uncomfortable to me my favorite color to wear is black i like to wear running shoes and sandals i like to wear my hair up cause it’s always hot in my state and i don’t like my hair in my face i don’t like my hair down because it gets in my face and it’s to hot.

I’m 16 years old and I lived in Phoenix, Arizona until I was 13. Phoenix is very sunny, with a lot of palm trees. It can be very hot, almost up to 100 degrees and sometimes can get even higher. When I went to Tuscano Elementary School, it was an alright experience and for middle school I went to Western Valley Middle School. It was okay, I went there for 2 years.  

 I did online school for a short while and switched to public school again at Marionneaux Elementary/Middle School. It was really nice and I made a lot of friends. Then for freshman year of high school, I went to Buckeye Union High School. I liked it alot, my friends from my middle school were there and the teachers were fun. Then I switched to Youngker High School to see what it was like. It was good, I liked the teachers and I made some friends. Then I switched to Pennfoster High School and I like it so far. It’s helping me learn easier at home because it’s quiet and I can focus easier and learn more.

 This year so far is good. I’m learning a lot and communicating more with people. My baby brother Rudy was born on January 21, 2020. He’s chubby and super cute. He likes to move a lot, I help out with him a lot and I help out around the house a lot more since my older brother is sick and my baby brother is always with my mom so she has a lot of work to do with him already.

 My hobbies are mostly listening to music. I like all types of music although my favorites are My Chemical Romance, Bring Me The Horizon and Melanie Martinez. My favorite songs are mostly from My Chemical Romance though.

       I also like to read stories online or read a book from the library. My favorite book genres are horror fiction, mystery, comics, and fantasy. My favorite authors are Stephen King and J.K. Rowling. I like horror fiction because you never know what’s coming next and I like the adventure that comes with. I also like mystery for the same reason. I like comics because I can see the pictures of the characters and how the author wanted them to look. I like to see the scenery in the comic but i also like to imagine what the characters would look like in my mind so that's why I read books a lot of the time.

Video games are also fun. I like to play roblox and play on Xbox. Sometimes my favorite type of games are fantasy, survival horror, action, and survival games. I like survival because it’s fun trying to figure stuff out and learn more about the game while having fun. Fantasy is also fun because the characters don’t have to be human, you can make them whatever you want them to be so it makes it more fun and exciting.

 I like to also search things up when i’m not doing anything. I search things such as careers I might want to do. I don’t think I’ve fully decided yet though because there are are so many things I am interested in, I don’t really like to stick to one thing. I like to explore new ideas and try new things. I really want to travel though because I want to see different places other than where I live such as Georgia, Maine, Washington, and Maryland. I want to go there because they are green places and I like nature as well as the houses and how they aren't the same.

 I feel like I’m a very introverted person. I don’t talk a lot unless I have to and when I do talk, it has to be with a really good friend. I also feel like I have a big imagination and I’m constantly thinking of new thing or trying to figure things out. I like to be independent and I’m always trying to improve myself. I can be determined if i really want to do something or if it seems interesting. I like to analyze new things I see and want to learn more.

 I like to wear comfortable clothes like shorts and a big t-shirt. I like to also wear pants with a big t-shirt. I don’t like wearing dresses or skirts because they are extremely uncomfortable to me. My favorite color to wear is black. I like to wear running shoes and sandals. I like to wear my hair up because it’s always hot in my state and I don’t like my hair in my face.

I edited it for you, just copy and paste (:

I’m 16 years old I lived in Phoenix till I was 13 Phoenix is very sunny with a lot of palm trees it can be very hot almost up to 100 degrees and over when I went to Tuscano Elementary School it was alright and for middle school, I went to Western Valley Middle School it was okay I went there for 2 years.

I did online school for a short while and switched to public school again at Marionneaux Elementary/ middle School it was really nice I made a lot of friends then for high school for freshman year I went to Buckeye Union High School i liked it a lot my friends from my middle school were there and the teachers were fun then i switched to Youngker High School to see what it was like it was good i liked the teachers and i made some friends then i switched to Pennfoster High School and i like it so far it’s helping me learn easier at home because it’s quiet and i can focus easier and learn more.

This year so far is good i’m learning a lot and communicating more with people and my baby brother Rudy was born on jan 21,2020 he’s chubby and super cute he likes to move a lot i help out with him a lot and i help around the house a lot more because my older brother is sick and my baby brother is always with my mom so she has a lot of work to do with him.

my hobbies are i like to listen to music i like all types of music my favorites are My Chemical Romance, Bring Me The Horizon and Melanie Martinez my favorite songs are mostly from My Chemical Romance though.

But I also like to read stories online or read a book from the library my favorite book genres are Horror Fiction, Mystery, Comics and Fantasy. My favorite authors are Stephen King and J.K. Rowling i like Horror Fiction because you never know what’s coming next and I like adventure i also like Mystery for the same reason and i like comics because i can see the pictures of the characters and how the author wanted them to look and i like to see the scenery in the Comic but i also like to imagine what the characters would look like in my mind so i read books a lot of the time.

Video games are also fun i like to play Roblox and play on Xbox sometimes my favorite type of games are Fantasy, survival Horror, Action and survival games i like survival cause it’s fun trying to figure stuff out and learn more about the game well having fun and fantasy is also fun cause the characters don’t have to be human you can make them whatever you want them to be so it makes it more fun and exciting.

I like to also search things up when i’m not doing anything like careers i might want to do i don’t think i’ve fully decided yet though because they’re are so many things i would like to do i don’t really like to stick to one thing i like to explore new ideas and try new things i really wanna travel though for sure because i want to see different places other than where i live like Georgia, Maine, Washington and Maryland because they are green places and i like nature and i like the houses and how they aren't the same.

I feel like i’m a very introverted person i don’t talk a lot unless i have to and when i do it has to be with a really good friend i also feel like i have a big imagination and i’m constantly thinking of new thing or trying to figure things out i like to be independent and i’m always trying to improve myself and i can be determined if i really want to do something or if it seems interesting i like to analyze new things i see and old to learn more.

I like to wear comfortable clothes like shorts and a big t-shirt i like to also wear pants with a big t-shirt i don’t like wearing dresses or skirts cause they are extremely uncomfortable to me my favorite color to wear is black i like to wear running shoes and sandals i like to wear my hair up cause it’s always hot in my state and i don’t like my hair in my face i don’t like my hair down because it gets in my face and it’s too hot.

Explanation: I revised it but there is a lot of repetition of the word “A lot”

maybe think of some other Synonyms of the word

a complex sentence consists of an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses.  

to write complex sentences, we must use subordinating conjunctions.  

all the complex sentences begin with a subordinating conjunction and when it occurs, a comma must be place at the end of the dependent clause. on the contrary, if the sentence begins with an independent clause, then no comma is used.

after  

although  

as  

because  

before  

if  

since  

when  

for example,  

after she won the competition, she became very popular.  

although my father was hurt, he continued fighting for his rights.  

as all of you got a ten, you will be able to leave early today.  

before he went to the war, he asked his parents to bless him.  

if it is cold, i won’t go out.  

since you didn’t bring the homework, you will get low grades.  

when it is hot in the town, everyone goes to the beach.