DOING A REVIEW PLZ HELP

3. revise the following paragraph from a student essay. focus on making the main claim clearer, strengthening the evidence, and addressing problems with plagiarism. you may choose to use portions of the paragraph as they are written. underline any phrases or sentences that you copy from the original paragraph. then use bold font to highlight any sentences you added to the paragraph. (15 points) student paragraph: eating healthy foods is a really cool thing to do for your body. healthy food can actually slow down the aging process. foods that are high in anti-oxidants and omega-3 fatty acids protect cells and the cells live longer (p. 20 -- olivia anderson, a natural foods chef). living longer lets you do more. ian jones on pg. 15: "people in their 80s give more back to their communities than those who died in their 60s ever did." healthy food means a long good life. and living longer is awesome!

What argument does thomas jefferson make in this excerpt from the declaration of independence? we hold these truths to be self-evident that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness.-that to secure these rights, governments are instituted among men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed, -that whenever any form of government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the right of the people to alter or to abolish it, and to institute new government, laying its foundation on such principles and organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most likely to effect their safety and happiness. a. b. c. the american colonists desire a more peaceful alliance with great britain but their british counterparts do not. the american colonists have a right to seek freedom from great britain due to the continued oppression of their basic rights. the american colonies could form a better government than the one established by great britain to govern them. the king of britain and the members of british parliament have little interest in the welfare of the colonies. od. e. the american colonies should have sufficient representation in british parliament if america and great britain are to coexist peacefully.

You need to write a 1600 word essay about how to make a proper discord server, i will supply a outline that i have made. 1. make the server a. go create server b. make a name c. select a picture to use d. select your region e. press create 2. inviting people a. invite people you have on discord b. if no, copy link and add never expire c. optional to do later 3. make channels a. decide what you want this to be about "list options" b. make channels around your topic "one already made" c optional add voice chats "one already made" 4. make roles a. make roles for moderation "other roles for trusted people to you run server" b. optional make roles for other people "explain in essay" 5. make rules a. make rules for everyone to follow b. make rules for people higher in ranking to follow c. inform mods on how to enforce rules 6. optional add bots a. bots make life easy b. makes moderation easier to enforce 7. listen to community a. your community/people in your server are best to listen to "explain in essay" b. change things that your community wants to be modified. you need to go into detail about almost every line in order to reach the 1600 words.