Ijust want to know if what i have so far of my conclusion of my argumentative essay is good or decent. unless you want to, you don't need to give feedback. i just want to know if what i have so far is good and if you can understand the point of the essay. just a personal opinion. (if you do want to give feedback, i want to include the counterclaim in some way, but im not sure how, or how to phrase it, so you could alot with that) you! what i have of my conclusion so far is:

"after reading this essay on why i believe child soldier's don't deserve amnesty, because; they enjoy working as soldier's. they don't care about who they hurt, and they won't be able to adapt to non-radical views. im sure you can understand why i believe child soldier's don't deserve amnesty. in case you need a reminder, i quoted from the article " the child soldier on trial at guantanamo" for each of the pieces of evidence i used.