Hello read this poem plz
i wrote it tell me what you think plz?

what is love with you

it is like a blossom in my heart
and you always make me smile,
so now it is time that i do my part
and put in that extra mile.

i have loved you the moment you came
i wanted to swoop you under your feet-
but i never knew i would be such a shame,
but now i won’t skip a beat,
and this will never be the same.

what is love with you?
it is like sitting in a pot of stew,
it’s so warm and feels like home,
but now i want to be ur dome,
i want you to feel at home too.