What change is made to add variety in the revision?
original: it was a beautiful place. i'd love to go back
someday.
revision: the landscape was beautiful, and i'd love to
go back someday!
a restrictive clause is added to clarify what the
landscape was like.
the word beautiful is changed to landscape to be
more specific.
two simple sentences are turned into a compound
sentence.
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What change is made to add variety in the revision?
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