Write a personal narrative of 500–750 words about a lesson learned or an important personal event. your personal narrative should have a beginning, middle, and a conclusion that ties up the narrative by answering questions and revealing your purpose.

review you narrative, and make sure you have

developed a clear sequence of events.

used first-person point of view.

used a variety of narrative techniques.

used vivid and sensory language.

created a chronological sequence.

used transitions that indicate chronological sequence.

used three module vocabulary words.

included at least one correctly punctuated sentence beginning with a subordinate clause.

answer:   memories of a personal event                                                                               the door slammed shut. i wasn't sure what i was going to hear. to be honest, i wasn't really sure whether i wanted to either. a nearby shadow gradually transformed into my dad, who walked into the kitchen. dad was holding his breath as if to try and prevent the three small words which would change my life forever. i stared at my dad. many thoughts were spinning through my head and i began to feel dizzy. dad spluttered out,

  "stacey had died," with little sign of remorse. i couldn't believe what he had just told me, i was refusing to listen as i fell into the arms of my older brother and sister. at…show more content…

halloween was special for a number of reasons. firstly, it was only the one i shared with stacey. i also received a record amount of sweets, money and fruit. i could not believe my luck. i think it was down to stacey's charm (even if she was cruella devil) or my not so genius, john higgins impersonation. that night just proved to be special. stacey and i shared jokes, threw away monkey nuts and knocked on over 100 doors. after it was decided we should go home, we started our chocolate. fireworks were being lit in my estate and were somewhat spectacular. i distinctively remember hugging stacey and being ecstatic. it seemed as though life was perfect. the fireworks stopped. stacey suffered from really bad asthma. i know many people suffer from asthma and the severity is wide-ranging. i also know it's very rare for someone to die from an attack. medicines are readily available and in the 21st century, i wouldn't expect death as a consequence of asthma. stacey's asthma prevented us from playing as much football as we would have liked. i never for one minute thought stacey could ever suffer a fatal attack. i don't think many people think of the consequences of the illness until the reality is riveted home through a tragedy. the night before stacey died, we both sat in her house discussing things as usual. i never once imagined that it

explanation:

the answer:

in the first part of the story running is all that matters to squeaky. running gives her confidence and defines who she is. at the beginning of the story she says that other kids call her mercury because she runs very fast. in the text she refers to herself as "miss quicksilver".

the line that provides the best evidence that squeaky has self-confidence is

" and i continue with my breathing exercise, strolling down broadway toward the ice cream man on 145th with not a care in the world cause i am miss quicksilver herself".