Percussionist susie ibarra has taught at the university of michigan, juilliard, the manhattan school of music, and is married. what is wrong with the sentence? the ideas are not coordinate. it has excessive coordination. it has an incorrect conjunctive adverb. it has an incorrect coordinate conjunction.

the ideas are not coordinate.

Explanation:

Coordination involves connecting ideas, sentences or clauses which possess the same importance. Ideas are typically linked with coordinating conjunctions, like and, but and so.

In the sentence given, Ibarra's marital status should be placed in a different position, and the list of places where she has taught should include the coordinating conjunction and before the last item mentioned:

Percussionist Susie Ibarra, who is married, has taught at the University of Michigan, Juilliard and the Manhattan School of Music.