Read a literary analysis written by caroline about part 1 of the call of the wild.

when buck is introduced to "the law of the club” by the man in the red sweater, he is humbled. he admits that any man with a club is the law giver. although buck is forced to respect this law, he offers only obedience to the man, never any kindness. jack london explains, "of [kindness] buck was never guilty, though he did see beaten dogs that fawned upon the man, and wagged their tails, and licked his hand.”

how could caroline best improve her analysis?

she could explain how the quotation supports her ideas.
she could cite evidence from the text to support her opinion.
she could include a thesis statement to express her position.
she could evaluate the text to analyze the big ideas and messages.

3one of the biggest impacts a building has on earth is the energy it uses. currently, most of the world’s energy comes from burning fossil fuels. these fuels are dirty and when they are burned they pollute the air and water. one way to burn fewer fossil fuels is to reduce the amount of electricity a building has to use. passive solar heating, which uses heat from the sun, reduces the amount of fossil fuel used to heat buildings. passive solar heating requires a south-facing wall made of glass. when sunlight shines through the wall, it is collected and used to warm the building. another way green buildings reduce their electricity use is to install other energy sources. for example, some green buildings use panels that turn energy from the sun into useable electricity. which is the best summary of paragraph 3? a) fossil fuels are dirty and pollute the air and water. most of the world's energy comes from these fuels. b) the biggest problem of buildings is that they use fuel that is dirty for heating. they need to do something to be more energy efficient. c) panels that turn energy from the sun into electricity and passive solar heating can stop the burning of fossil fuels which pollute air and water. d) since fossil fuels are dirty and pollute the air and water, other technologies that pollute less and produce energy have been developed like solar energy and green buildings.