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1.4.3 test (cst): the short story, part 1
read this passage:
the third reason it is vital that we do everything we can to
preserve whittier park is that it has a profound place in
whittier's history. not only was it the site of a ridiculous
civil war battle, but it was also the place where football
legend johnny knight first tossed around the old pigskin
with his pops. what a double whammy, right?
which revision best maintains an academic style throughout?
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a. the third reason it's totally important that we do everything we can
to preserve whittier park is that it plays a crazy-big part in
whittier's history. not only was it the site of an intense and
important civil war battle, but it was also the place where football

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