During peer evaluation, marty gives his partner the following feedback.
i don't understand your thesis.
how can this feedback be improved to make it more specific?
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a. revise your thesis to make clear to the reader exactly what your
position is on global warming.
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b. your thesis seems like it's not too clear. you should fix it.
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c. i think readers might not be able to determine what your thesis is
supposed to be. pick a different sentence to use.
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d. this is really great but you should clarify your thesis a bit more. it's
just not clear.
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The rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. which choice combines these two sentences from paragraph two to achieve a coherent flow of ideas? a) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden" and permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. b) permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago and the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." c) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden; " and so the permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. d) because of the rich natural resources which made the sacramento valley a ‘garden of eden,’ native americans established permanent villages there 8,000 years ago.