Writing assignm
ent: point of view
rewrite this scene from daisy's or gatsby's
include the character's inner thoughts, da
aidlogue between characters.
or gatsby's point of view.
oughts, description of of
and dialogue between ch
of view. your rewritten scene must
on of other characters/the setting,
note: you may use the
don't let dialogue dominate you are rewrit
dialogue, as long as it stays true
movie versions of books change the dialo
representation of the character or scene i
ve but not in a way that changes the
e dialogue from the original
our entire rewritten scene.'
je to the scene and charac
ne original text, but nothing else.
in scene. also, you may rewrite the
id characters. (example: many
acter or scene, ideally.)
when you are finished, answer the following a
wer the following questions:
1. how did the change in narration affect the storya
2. which narrator-nick or daisy/gatsby-do you think is more effective in this
scene? explain.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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"a" because he is appealing to logic as oppose to appealing to the audience's emotions.

nominative

no se

explanation:

no se