Revising a passage with parallel structu
which revision of the underlined sentences creates a
parallel structure within the paragraph?
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because the recorder is familiar, children feel
comfortable playing it.
kelsey is an engineering student at lafayette college in
easton, pennsylvania. for her senior project, she and
her team are designing a robotic device to children
with disabilities play a musical instrument. they selected
the recorder. the recorder has several advantages over
other instruments. the recorder is plastic, making it low
low
cost and durable. the recorder is small, allowing it to be
held easily. another advantage is that many people are
familiar with the recorder. so children feel more
comfortable playing it.
the recorder is familiar, children feel more
comfortable playing it.
people are familiar with the recorder, which creates
comfort for children.
musical instruments need to feel comfortable to
children if we expect them to try to play.
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"to tell it right, it was through you i found my life and breathed again, and then through you my eyesight failed." this quote is from oedipus the king, explain why it's significant, paying special attention to word choice, figurative language, and the larger themes it reflects.

Read the excerpt from a history of the world in 100 objects. power is usually not willingly given, but forcefully taken; and in both europe and america the nineteenth century was punctuated by political protest, with periodic revolutions on the continent, the civil war in america and, in britain, a steady struggle to widen the suffrage. what would be a benefit of reading this text rather than listening to an audio version of it? the reader could analyze the text features in the excerpt. the reader could visualize the description given. the reader could set his or her own pace and reread parts for clarity. the reader could hear the sounds of the political protest.

Time remaining 59: 46 which central idea should be included in a paraphrase of this excerpt? read the excerpt from the odyssey. out to sea again! ' my men were mutinous, fools, on stores of wine. sheep after sheep they butchered by the surf, and shambling cattle, feasting.-while fugitives went inland, running to call to arms the main force of cicones this was an army, trained to fight on horseback or, where the ground required, on foot. they came with dawn over that terrain like the leaves and blades of spring. so doom appeared to us, dark word of zeus for us, our evil days. the forces sent by cicones to fight odysseus and his men arrived during the early morning hours. odysseus and his men feasted on the animals they slaughtered while on the island of cicones the forces sent by cicones to stop the plundering of odysseus and his men were skilled and powerful odysseus views the forces sent by cicones as punishment from the greek god zeus. mark this and retum save and exit save and exit next sub subunit