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i told them how surprised and excited i was to have my
painting selected, especially since i'd felt so incompetent at
the beginning and i knew the competition was so ruthless.
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yup, it was a big surprise, "i told them. tm excited that
my painting was selected especially since i felt so
incompetent at the beginning and the competition was so
ruthless."
"honestly, i was surprised," i told them truthfully. the
competition was ruthless, and i felt incompetent at the
beginning. it's really exciting to have my painting
selected! "
"i'm in! my painting is in! i feel a fist pump and a title
dance coming on," i said, grinning. i thought about how
felt so incompetent at the beginning because of the
ruthless competition.
"did you hear? " i asked them. "my painting got selected!
exciting, right? " i smiled. "especially given that i felt so
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incompetent ai the beginning and that the competition was
ruthless! "