Add adjectives to improve the following passage.
the man stopped by the park to pet
the dog. then he stepped into the
bus. the bus made stops before it
pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. he
jumped out and ran up the steps. a
while later, he returned with a bag of
scraps for the dog.

the man stopped by the beautiful park to pet

the big dog. then he stepped into the

bus. the bus made stops before it

pulled up in front of a little restaurant. he

jumped out and ran up the tall steps. a

while later, he returned with a bag of

scraps for the big dog.

explanation:

i capitalized the adjectives but dont use them capitalized

hope this .

the man stopped by the giant park to pet the soft, fuzzy dog. then he stepped on to the small red bus. the red bus made stops before it pulled up in from of a quiet cozy restaurant. he jumped out and ran up the concrete steps. a while later, he returned with a good sized bag of old scraps for the fuzzy dog.

should you be the one doing this journal entry? it says "your special talent or skill". are you gonna lie 'bout your talent and make us fake a talent for you?

also this is a really easy journal entry, you can just think of a skill your good at and write did you work hard to become good at this skill (ex: drawing, writing, math, playing music, etc.) or does it come naturally (like a cool trick that you can do with your body). you can do all of that in 150 words. just try and think of a talent and even if your bad at this talent just say your working hard to become good at it.