1.identify three substantial weaknesses in your draft.
2.provide an example (the page or paragraph where the change will occur, for instance).
3. identify what changes you will make to strengthen these weaknesses and how you chose to make those changes.

Read the excerpt from frederick douglass’s speech “what to the slave is the fourth of july? ”go where you may, search where you will, roam through all the monarchies and despotisms of the old world, travel through south america, search out every abuse, and when you have found the last, lay your facts by the side of the everyday practices of this nation, and you will say with me, that, for revolting barbarity and shameless hypocrisy, america reigns without a rival. what is one way that douglass achieves his purpose of persuading the reader to see his point of view? by relating as many facts and statistics to the reader as possibleby using familiar and casual language to make the reader feel comfortableby using gentle language to evoke a sense of calm and tranquilityby repeating the word “you” to directly relate to the reader

Why would viktoria most likely include this paragraph in the middle of her essay? to introduce the main challenge she faces to explain some of the obstacles she faces to explain how she overcomes her obstacles to discuss how the challenge changes her

Arrange the events from hamlet in the order in which they occur, from first to last. hamlet contemplates suicide. the appearance of a ghost is reported. hamlet says he disapproves of his mother’s remarriage. fortinbras takes over the throne. hamlet verbally abuses ophelia. laertes is killed in a swordfight. ophelia dies. ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓