So yesteray i wrote a poem for my english class, i'm really into poems and so on, so heres another one i wrote, give me your'e honest oppinion on it (thinking of sending it to my teacher).

see the lonely girl,
trying to pass the day.
hiding her tears behind her curls,
there isn't much to say
why do i stay when i want to go?
is it because i have hope?
or maybe it is because i don't want to be alone.