Correct the five highlighted areas by fixing the punctuation and words

1. this, the 2. kid's 3. read, take notes, and 4. their 5. breaks

Explanation:

1. comma rule

2. apostrophe needed

3. comma rule

4. their because it's that persons possession

5. spelling rules

the rhetorical devices that he used in "common sense" are syntax for his sentence structure and pathos for his emotion against the british unfairly treating the "americans" and logos of what documents that what happened to the pilgrims when they had the mayflower compact and how that the british were wanting to have one religion but the compact said for any religion to be accepted.