Read the paragraph. [1] thomas paine, a pivotal figure in the american revolution, was born in britain in 1737. [2] when he was in his mid-thirties, he met benjamin franklin in london. [3] franklin paine move to philadelphia, where he pursued a career in journalism, he became the editor of pennsylvania magazine. [4] in 1776, paine authored a pro-independence pamphlet called common sense, which was widely read throughout the colonies. which sentence should be revised to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?