Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:
in the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.
which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.
it has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.
it has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.
it has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.
it has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Read this sentence from "the wife's lament

The speaker in “the courage that my mother had” is a daughter friend grandchild mother

(1) one of the most popular festivals in southeast asia is diwali, the hindu festival of lights. (2) diwali means “row of lights.” (3) several legends claim that the festival was created to celebrate the homecoming of lord rama after more than 14 years of exile. (4) after lord rama defeated the demon ravana, the people placed small lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home. (5) today, the festival honors many different gods and traditions. (6) most people view diwali as a celebration of hope and a time to remember that good will always overcome evil. (7) people celebrate the five-day festival with an abundance of lights, fireworks, food, and music. (8) many families also pay their respects to different gods by building small altars in their homes. jordan has decided that moving sentence 4 before sentence 3 will improve the organization of the report. is jordan correct in her revision? a) yes, because the revision explains why rama was exiled b) no, the revision disrupts the logical order of the report c) no, the revision moves the answer away from the posed question eliminate d) yes, the revision improves the chronological order of the report