Read the passage.

(1) with time and effort, we can replace fossil fuels with alternative sources of energy. (2) alternative energy sources can save the planet. (3) unfortunately, most people use fossil fuels in their daily lives, so they will continue to use them unnecessarily. (4) still, if enough citizens do their research and see the benefits of alternative energy, then we can turn the tide in our favor. (5) for example, using just 19 percent of unclaimed desert areas for solar installations could provide electricity for the entire nation. (6) if each individual who believes that alternative energy can make a difference takes a step away from fossil fuel use, then we can change the world.

how can the passage best be revised to eliminate logical fallacies and improve clarity? select two options.

by adding the transition as a result to the beginning of sentence 1
by adding the transition additionally to the beginning of sentence 2
by revising sentence 3 to eliminate the use of circular reasoning
by removing the transition still from sentence 4
by revising sentence 6 to eliminate the use of hasty generalization

by revising sentence 3 to eliminate the use of circular reasoning

by revising sentence 6 to eliminate the use of hasty generalization

When reading this passage, the two sentences that cause me the most pause and rereading were sentences 3 and 6. This was my first indication that these two sentence were in need of revision. Looking at all the answer options, adding or deleting transition words would not add to or help the clarity of sentence 1, 2, or 4. Eliminating the circular reasoning in sentence 3 would help this sentence because it basically says in a round about way that people are going to continue to use fossil fuels because they use them now. This says the same thing twice. Sentence 6 is confusing because it is too wordy. By eliminating the hasty generalization the sentence becomes clearer and more concise.

the black night was split open like the coconut

it says that it was totally black in the mind of a person but suddenly his mind opened like a coconut with the sweetness of the coconut water and the white color inside it.

or

the black night was thrown like a coconut and it slit apart with its sweet water coming out .

c.caliberate the new thermometer and begin the experiment again