Step 5: outline due thursday 11/30 outline: create an outline for your essay. include your revised thesis at the top. use one of the following templates (make a copy) to organize your essay. 2 paragraph essay outline 3 paragraph essay outline mrs. louden’s sample outline resources for outlining your introduction: how to write a introduction sample introduction paragraph resources for outlining your conclusion: how to write a conclusion sample conclusion paragraph paste a link to your outline here: stop! go check feedback on your thesis and/or claims. make revisions so you won’t have to later! step 6: quote integration and explaining evidence now, choose one of your paragraphs. you will integrate and write insight for each of the quotes in just this paragraph. use the chart you put your quotes in from step 4 to continue this process. resources for quote integration: handout with examples and explanations quote integration presentation (oreo cookie) how to in tegrate quotations examples of bad/good/excellent quote integration how to write insight (he calls it “commentary” but it’s the same thing) put a link to your quote integration chart here: stop! look at the progress board--find someone else who is on the same step as you. have that person read over your integrated quotes and insight and give feedback. ask them to check to make sure your integrated quotes flow from your own thoughts into the quote (see examples), and make sure that your insight is not a summary, but instead explains how the quote proves your claim. who gave you feedback: what feedback did they give: step 7: body paragraphs now it’s time to write a body paragraph. using the quote integration chart and the feedback you received on it, write a whole body paragraph. be sure to use the handouts to organize your paragraph. it must be in csi format and contain all the necessary parts for a thorough paragraph. resources for body paragraphs: how to write a body paragraph body paragraph structure handout paste a link to your body paragraph here here: step 8: self-edit due tuesday 12/5 submit your draft paragraph to paperrater. com. use feedback to polish your writing. here is a tutorial for paperrater. com what feedback did you get from paperrater. com? write the top 3-5 errors you need to correct here: resources for improving your writing: inexcusable errors (with “how to” links for all the hard things! ) check for other issues by watching this video complete essay self-edit: 1. open the self-edit. 2. carefully go through each item on the checklist. 3. here, write 3-5 (positive or negative) observations about your essay based on the self-edit: step 9: revise and submit final draft final draft due thursday 12/7 revise your up-draft and submit to your teacher for grading. review mla format guidelines and make sure yours is setup like the one below: be sure to check the final guidelines before you’re “done”.