Iliterally just need someone to edit this and see if it's a good introductory paragraph for an argumentive essay on whether or not discrimination against lgbt youth can be deadly.

american l. g.b. t. people have experienced many problems that jeopardize their short-term and long-term health, whether it be by social, economic, or medical standards. the research shows that the result of culture and of politics caused this community to be treated as lesser human beings, especially the youth of the community. america has an elephant in the room, especially when statistics show that l. g.b. t. youth are more likely to attempt or commit suicide than heterosexual youth due to discrimination. this discrimination against queer youth can be deadly because it can lead to a lack of parental care, higher risk of mental health issues, and suicide.

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➳ This intro is really good and I think it's an amazing topic to talk about! I would remove the "of" before the politics because you already said "of culture".

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the correct answer is option d. the nature of democracy. on november 19, 1863, president abraham lincoln delivered his famous gettysburg address in gettysburg, pennsylvania. in his speech, rather than focusing on details of the war (soldiers, casualties, aftermath of battle), lincoln invoked the very nature of democracy, that power ultimately comes from the people, when stating, “government of the people, by the people, for the people shall not perish”. these words mean that democracy is a government by the people (citizens) in which the supreme power is vested in the people and exercised directly by the people or by their elected representatives for the benefit of all citizens. the survival of democracy in the united states is one of the reasons why this speech so significant today.