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read the excerpt from "bluesman on the move.”

it’s hard to believe, i know,
an old man and his tales.
stray notes from my guitar still
bounce around the mountains like ghosts.

the word "ghosts” creates a sense of

fear.
loneliness.
hostility.
confusion.

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."

write it down

then read over it

then trun it in