Which of the following sentences should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

a.) the restaurant is famous for its delicious and tangy barbeque sauce.
b.) the troop will earn points for each and every box of cookies sold.
c.) mr. ellis decided to retire after an admirable and rewarding career in law.
d.) as a sailor, michael traveled all over the world and saw amazing places

B) The troop will earn points for each and every box of cookies sold.

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Which of the following sentences should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

A.) The restaurant is famous for its delicious and tangy barbeque sauce.

B.) The troop will earn points for each and every box of cookies sold.

C.) Mr. Ellis decided to retire after an admirable and rewarding career in law.

D.) As a sailor, Michael traveled all over the world and saw amazing places

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.

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