Read the excerpt from act i, scene v of romeo and juliet.
romeo: what lady is that which doth enrich the hand
of yonder knight?
now read the adaptation.
romeo: who is that lady that knight is stuck with?
the adaptation needs revision because it
changes the tone.
changes the diction.
uses literal language.
uses figurative language.

changes the tone

Explanation:

What Romeo meant to say is "Who is that beutiful lady that holds that knights hand?, and as you can see you can´t infer that from the adaptation, that´s changing the tone of the sentence, it takes out from the sentence the warmness with which Romeo refers to the woman.

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