Read these sentences from yasmin's essay. nazario believes that central american children like enrique who come to the united states today are refugees and should be treated that way. if they were, she says, such children would not repeatedly have to face the dangers of migration, which bring tears to my eyes. which word or phrase should yasmin revise to eliminate informal and subjective language? "believes" "come to" "the dangers of migration" "which bring tears to my eyes"

The phrase that Yasmin should revise to eliminate informal and subjective language is "which bring tears to my eyes".

By using that phrase, Yasmin is not being objective. Moreover, she is referring to the emotional effect that Nazario's words have had on her, which is not relevant nor appropriate information for an essay. Furthermore, "which bring tears to my eyes" is an informal phrase; therefore, that is another reason why it should be eliminated. Only formal language should be used when working on an academic piece of writing.

Explanation:

in other words

to put it differently

for one thing

as an illustration

in this case

for this reason

to put it another way

that is to say

with attention to

by all means

important to realize

another key point

first thing to remember

most compelling evidence

must be remembered

point often overlooked

to point out

on the positive side

on the negative side

with this in mind

notably

including

like

to be sure

namely

chiefly

truly

indeed

certainly

surely

markedly

such as

especially

explicitly

specifically

expressly

surprisingly

frequently

significantly

particularly

in fact

in general

in particular

in detail

for example

for instance

to demonstrate

to emphasize

to repeat

to clarify

to explain

to enumerate

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