Iam writing an essay about my career and i need with perfecting my introduction. “the career i chose to present this year was photography. as most people know photographers are professionals that focus on the art of photography with a digital or film camera. photographers use artificial or natural lighting to snap pictures of various people, places and things in different settings.” (hearting all)

I would phrase it differently, such as; “The career I decided to present this year was photography. Photographers have made themselves well know as professionals who create artistic photos with a digital or film camera, photographers can use artificial or natural lighting to snap pictures of various people, places and objects in different positions and settings”.

explanation:

it's important for any number of settings.   but then i'm a retired teacher and my view may be biased.

it certainly will not weigh as a minus when applying to a college, while poor grades always work against you.

other factors are important like what you do to improve the community.  

the answer is c the speaker emotions