You and nine peers have been selected to apply for an important college scholarship. only one student will be awarded the scholarship. you have been asked to write a brief essay to the scholarship committee in which you share an important event in your life that significantly changed you, your view about life, your life goals, or your character for the better. apply narrative techniques, a solid prewriting strategy, and creative sentence patterns to share your story and stand apart from other applicants.

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A Very Important Event In My Life

        Many times people do not remember their daily activities, but if something unexpected or remarkable happens, it can be memorable for the rest of their lives. Am sure that everyone has an event that is memorable in their lives or even others have some events that they do not want to remember because they would remind them of old scars that that makes tears run down. There are good memories that regularly make us happy when we talk or share them with anyone. As creatures that have lived on this planet one should be having a memorable or bad event. Sometimes in one’s life there are some events that teach one a certain lesson and end up becoming a fundamental guideline in life. Life is loaded with startling shocks. There are numerous open doors when one can furtively wish for something energizing to happen like something strange. This paper seeks to narrate an important event that happened in my life and still today it still rings in my mind.

       The most critical occasion in my life has been going to MASC’s late spring authority camp in 2005 and 2006. Those ten days were maybe the most helpful days of my life. MASC remains for Missouri Relationship of Understudy Chambers. Since I joined our school’s Understudy Committee my senior year, I had the chance to go to their late spring camp. When I touched base, as a Level 1 camper, I was overpowered by the various insane and active campers. I didn’t know how I would fit in since I was modest around new individuals. Everybody was part into twenty six unique chambers. I was in chamber ‘M’. That week transformed me from a shy, new student Board member to a person who was totally fine with acting naturally and certain for his first year in student council. The main significant occasion was the Olympics. Each of the twenty six councils met up and took part in various recreations. This was the point at which our council first genuinely reinforced and brought me out of my customary range of familiarity. I figured out how imperative collaboration is and how to grasp everybody’s distinctive abilities. I am an exceptionally focused individual, however amid that night; I understood that it did not make a difference who won. All that made a difference was the recollections being made. Another action we did, that majorly affected me, was the show. Every committee made a farce to a well known tune and sang it before the whole camp.

       Overall these two events were and are still memorable in my life. At times people do not remember their daily activities, but if something unexpected or remarkable happens, it can be memorable for the rest of their lives. Just like me everyone has an event that is memorable in their lives or even others have some events that they do not want to remember because they would remind them of old scars that that makes tears run down.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

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