Ineed with punctuation and gramer it felt like a pit in my stomach as i got dropped into the water funnel. it was my niece birthday and my parents decided it would be a good supersize to bring her to the great wolf lodge. i slept the whole way to the place. i had no idea that we should be going to the great wolf lodge. when we arrived i had no idea where we were. as soon as we entered the door there was a giant poster on the wall that was from the commercial.
little did i know it was gonna be an awesome day. the great wolf loge's water park in january we had just gotten to the door to our hotel room and my dad said” ok is this the right room” and my mom replied “let me check the hotel key” and began searching her pockets to her amusement she forgot the key at the front desk. as i entered the massive stadium-sized room with 3 huge slides and 2 smaller ones than my sister said: “race you.” she took off at like a million miles an hour as she is older than me she was way faster than me. she beat me to the biggest slide. she had beaten me to the line to the slide and oh boy was it a line. we talked about how her life was going on her own and what i was gonna do when on the slide as we hit the crick in the slide and this was when i the water cough me full in the face and burnt my eyes and of course i removed my hand to wipe my face and that was the fatal mistake and then i was from this experience, i have learned to be much more cautious after that i have a little headache on the way back home later on i was fine.

It felt like a pit in my stomach as I got dropped into the water funnel. It was my niece birthday and my parents decided it would be a good super size to bring her to the great wolf lodge. I slept the whole way to the place. I had no idea that we should be going to the great wolf lodge. When we arrived I had no idea where we were! As soon as we entered the door there was a giant poster on the wall that was from the commercial!
little did I know it was going to be an awesome day. The great wolf loge's water park in January we had just gotten to the door to our hotel room and my dad said” OK is this the right room” and my mom replied “let me check the hotel key” and began searching her pockets to her amusement she forgot the key at the front desk. As I entered the massive stadium-sized room with 3 huge slides and 2 smaller ones than my sister said: “race you.” She took off at like a million miles an hour as she is older than me she was way faster than me. She beat me to the biggest slide. She had beaten me to the line to the slide and oh boy was it a line. We talked about how her life was going on her own and what I was going to do when On the slide as we hit the crick in the slide .

And this was when I the water cough me full in the face and burnt my eyes and of course I removed my hand to wipe my face and that was the fatal mistake and then I was from this Experience, I have learned to be much more cautious after that I have a little headache on the way back home later on I was fine.

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the answers are:

1. dolores driscoll - b. first person minor

dolores is a minor character who happens to be driving the bus at the time of the accident. she narrates picking up each of the children and her last memory is the children being thrown around the bus.

2. billy ansel - a. first person major

billy loses his twins in the accident. he tells his own story, how he witnessed the accident and how he tried to the rescuers. he is a major character, as he is at the center of the story.

3. mitchell stephens - c. first person observer

mitchell enters the story after the accident. he is a lawyer who learns about the accident based on other characters observations. though he tells the story from a first person perspective, he is just an observer.

as for matcthing the message or lesson posted with the person who said them:

1."obviously, you can't control everything, but you are obliged to take care of the few things you can. i'm an optimist basically who acts like a pessimist. on principle. just in case." - dolores driscoll

2. "i could no longer believe even in life. . for me now the only reality was death." - billy ansel