Can someone read over my story and let me know about errors? my teacher wants a personal essay and these are parts of my life over the past couple years. (for those who are in my hangouts inbox, i didn't mean to but i whipped out my account last night without knowing, so i need your emails again.) about two years ago, december 2016. i can remember it clear as day, my parents were having a distribute but i didn't know what it was about. the morning after, i had found out that mom had cheated on dad with another guy! when this was found out i was scared, depressed, stressed, etc. when i finally met who she was seeing i couldn't believe my eyes! she was seeing one of the richest people in south carolina! i got so mad. my first though was, "did mom leave dad for someone with money? ". with this though running in my head i was furious. i couldn't believe my eyes, what was i seeing? then around june, i moved in with this "boyfriend" of hers. come to find out he's abusive and likes to mistreat people when under his roof in his house. i would come home to my mom crying with broken bones and/or brusies. i got so dad never done this! i don't know how to handle it. (i didn't handle it well). the fights grew and grew and finally, i was done, i felt done. i mentally couldn't do it. i then locked myself in the bathroom looking at myself in the mirror "what have i done? " i have a pill bottle open in-front of me, ready for me to take all pills and just die. and that's exactly what i did. august 12th my birthday of last year, i woke up in the hospital and learned my lungs and kidney collasped on me. i had a kidney transplant and was hooked up to a stablizer. (for those who don't know what a stabalizer is, it is a tube that goes into your mouth to give you oxygen.) i wasn't breathing on my it's sad how one can think about take their own life without realizing the harm that they've done. i've learned my