Hi! you will choose 1 paragraph from my essay under that paragraph you will retype the whole thing and make it better by adding in adjectives, or using better verbs and correct any mistakes. under that you will type up a new paragraph telling about the changes you made: -) 100 points need asap the jellyfish population is taking over the ocean, jellyfish lay up to 40,000 which causes less fish for fishermen. fishermen and other fish, jellyfish are causing fishermen to get less fish get stung. making candy out of jelly jellyfish, schools are starting to make candy out of jellyfish and sell it for money. so, they can buy new nets for the fishermen. why did they not talk about getting bad stings from jellyfish? to begin, the number of mnemiopsis (knee-me-opsis) jellyfish blooms are leaving fisherman without fish, causing them to lose millions. in fact, they can hatch some 40,000 eggs daily. these blooms eat the larvae and eggs of fish that fisherman, especially local ones of the black sea, depend on, resulting in the loss of money. clearly, the problem is growing at a rapid rate. meanwhile, the jellyfish swarms are affecting fisheries, but the problem is also spreading to power plants. these plants are in japan, israel, and scotland. plankton ecologist steve hay says, "science data shows that over the past few years there has been an increase in swarms of jellyfish.” when the swarms clog the power plants, the people lose electricity which creates many upset citizens. with so many people affected, there needs to be some solutions. today, there is an unlikely hero in the black sea. a different species of jellyfish called the bereo jellyfish found its way into the black sea. this species eats the mnemiopsis jellyfish. the bereo are creating a more balanced ecosystem. although this has saved the black sea, scientists are wary about using the bereo in other seas. “we are thinking about using the bereo in other areas, but we are concerned. there is a real fear of negative ecological consequences from introducing new species.

The jellyfish population is conquering the ocean. Jellyfish can lay up to 40,000 which causes fish populations to decrease, which means less fish for fishermen. Jellyfish are causing fishermen to capture less fish get stung. Schools are beginning to make candy out of jellyfish and sell it for money, so they can buy new nets for the fishermen. Why did they not talk about getting painful stings from the jellyfish?

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government is strong when they have the ability to persuade those they govern to believe government has enough power to force them or should be forcing them to do government’s will.

when enough of the citizenry do not believe government can force them or should force them to do its bidding, government has lost or will lose its strength and power to coerce.

when enough of the citizenry do believe government can force or should force them to do its bidding, they become passive at the least or actively pro-government and repeat government’s own rhetoric to pass on what they have been persuaded by government’s propaganda.

a true majority isn’t always needed to govern or to stop government. many times all that is needed is a strong minority. if a determined 30% of the population rises up against government in a concerted effort to bring it down, this size minority usually will succeed as long as those actively opposing the minority are less in force than the minority. so if 41% of the population sits at home watching tv rooting for one side or the other, they don’t matter. it’s the active parties who make a difference.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)