Hurry 15 pts + brainliest read the following sentence. leonardo da vinci was interested in flight. he sketched flying machines. they are different shapes and sizes. they are unlikely to work. is the error in these sentences one of variety, conciseness, order, or structure? a. variety – the sentences are too choppy. b. conciseness – the sentences need to be in active voice. c. order – the sentences contain misplaced modifiers. d. parallel structure – the sentences do not use the same construction.

What is the effect of narrator's word choice on the tone of this passage? the words "my heart shrank within itself" create a fearful tone. the words "wounded his fellow" develop a remorseful tone. the words "struck harsh upon my ears" suggest an irritated tone. the words "better-omened" set a hopeful tone. excerpt from "the cabuliwallah" by rabindranath tagore i was sitting in my study, looking through the accounts, when some one entered, saluting respectfully, and stood before me. it was rahmun the cabuliwallah. at first i did not recognise him. he had no bag, nor the long hair, nor the same vigour that he used to have. but he smiled, and i knew him again. "when did you come, rahmun? " i asked him. "last evening," he said, "i was released from jail." the words struck harsh upon my ears. i had never before talked with one who had wounded his fellow, and my heart shrank within itself when i realised this; for i felt that the day would have been better-omened had he not turned up.