Rewrite the following sentences to make them more concise and precise. From Philip Laplante, Technical Writing: A Practical Guide for Engineers and Scientists 1. The mechanism will require a substantial amount of redesign.
2. The main housing mechanism as well as the linkage assembly must be thoroughly lubricated.
3. There are many replacement parts available out there.
4. Metal fatigue points often can and do result in major system failures.
5. Once the diagnostic tests are finished without reporting a failure, you are ready to fire up the engine.
6. During the give-and-take session with the customer, the following concerns were raised:
7. A repair kit must go along with each unit sold.
8. Using the diagnostic system installed on the main system,
9. The possible reasons for a subsystem failure are many fold:
10. After adding six quarts of reagent, the mixture will be more clear.
11. Each unit will weigh, more or less, 70 kg.
12. The customer was put off by the latest test trials.
13. A really strong odor was noticeable.
14. To start off the procedure,
15. These facts, taken as a whole, indicate that a system failure was inevitable.
16. One of the major actors in this disaster is speculating on a software tie-in.
17. The flexible strap is used for tying in together…
18. The vehicle must be able to operate in the presence of very fast currents.
19. The main software system should work together with the safety subsystem.