Does this sound good so far i had to write a story that has motion in it but idk if it sounds good so far joe’s sunday adventure joe got up from bed he was getting ready for school. he then walked out the door to go to school he rode his bike like he always does, but then he got chased by something. he then realised it was a rock. the rock then grew and then joe jumped off his bike and started running away from the rock. then he found a bush and hid behind it until the rock went away. when the rock went away joe found his bike and it had a flat tire. so he had to walk and he had 15 minutes to get to school. it then started to rain and a truck splashed water on him. he was all soaked and smelled like a wet dog. joe started walking back to his house to change his wet cloths. while he was walking back to his house a dog started chasing him. joe speed up and ran as fast as he could. he was to busy running that he passed his house. joe saw mr. augustyn’s house the door wasn’t locked so he went right inside. he waited there until the dog went away. when mr. augustyn saw joe he asked joe why he was in his house all wet. he told mr. augustyn what happened to him on the way to school. that’s when mr. augustyn told him it was sunday there was no school today. joe walked out the house at a slow rate.