You are working as a medical administrative assistant at Saint Catherine Children’s Hospital. Janet, your supervisor, asks you to review and edit an email that she is preparing to send out to the staff. Before it is sent, provide your recommendations for improvement. Read the email above and identify four areas where improvement could be made in grammar and sentence structure. (Hint: Refer to your textbook for recommendation ideas.)

When it is 4: 00 a. m. in halifax, it is 1: 00 p. m. in karachi, and when it is 9: 00 a. m. in karachi, it is 5: 00 a. m. in warsaw. mary left halifax to fly to karachi, but she accidentally left her watch on warsaw time. according to mary’s watch, she left halifax at 9: 40 p. m. on monday. the local time when she arrived at karachi was 3: 00 p. m. tuesday. how long was mary’s flight? a. 9 hours, 20 minutes b. 13 hours, 20 minutes c. 14 hours, 20 minutes d. 17 hours, 20 minutes