Write a paragraph here where you pretend to coach/teach the artist of the not so good landscape.HOW can you improve their work? What would you tell them?

(First of all, I just want to say this 'not so good landscape' is actually really cool)

I would tell the artist to make straighter and smoother lines, because the ones on the building and the mountain to the left are curvy and uneven. Unless this was their intent, I would focus on fixing this next time. Just making everything more symmetrical because it is a bit hard finding depth in it because of this.