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Arts, 22.03.2021 16:00 aidanwindsor1738

So here's another one of my songs can you people give me some feedback or does it need any changing? (Also I kinda just wanted to give away points to tehe)

My One and Only

Here’s my song to you.
Can you hear me when I say,
“My feelings are there too”.
And I want you to know that I love you more.
More than what can stay bound within my core.
You’re my one and only.
I just want you to hold me.
My love for you is infinite.
And I know I don’t gotta hint at it.
Because, you love me as I love you.
And that much, I know is true.
I love to hear your voice and see you smile.
Yes, for you I’d go the extra mile.
I love you with all of my being.
I hope that you see when I say that it has meaning.
You truly are my other half.
And you always know how to make me laugh.
Here’s my song to you.
Can you hear me when I say,
“My feelings are there too”.
And I want you to know that I love you more.
More than what can stay bound within my core.
You’re my one and only.
I just want you to hold me.
You do so much for me,
And it makes me feel lucky.
Lucky, for someone like you to love me.
You are my world, oh, you are my all.
Plus, you're really, really tall.
So, here’s my song to you.
Can you hear me when I say,
“My feelings are there too”.
And I want you to know that I love you more.
More than what can stay bound within my core.
Yea, you’re my one and only.
I just want you to hold me.

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