What do u guys think of this drawing I did? Honest opinions

After first arriving in new york, charlie parker took a job as a dishwasher at jimmy's chicken shack, where played the piano nightly. listening to his astonishing harmonic restructuring, virtuoso phrasing, and breakneck tempos every night for three months, charlie parker challenged himself to adopt these qualities into his playing, and he continued to practice tirelessly.

Which artist is often considered the leader of the hudson river school and poignantly set up contrast between the cultivated east and the wild west in the united states?

Diferenças entre musica como arte e musica como indústria cultural