First off, this is really good! And as for advice, if you want, you could also add "Tell me the truth even if it hurts, it's better than lying" (I don't know much but I hope this helps)
In "combining perspectives," scott describes scholars attempts to synthesize and reconcile the rational, natural, and open systems perspectives. the result is a proliferation of theories. does this proliferation of theories or hinder organizational sociology in your opinion?