What do you guys think of this HeartBreaking song? Im doing it for a friend, let me know what u think or what i should put in next!

I tried on my own
To get you off my mind..
Cry myself to sleep every night...

You left me there
Lying on the floor
No warnings were shown...

I begged you not go
But you turned around
And walked out the door
Of my heart now torn apart

Now I'm drowning in my tears
Trying to forget

And every single day
I'm trying let the pain go
Trying to forget you