Poem : into the darkness and out of the light
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into the darkness

i step out and meet something.

it's not pleasant.

nor inviting.

out of the light

i walk into shadows.

surrounded by memories,

rising up from the hallows.

into the darkness

i approach an unseeable creature.

carefully stepping. one, two,

i see unbelievable features.

out of the light

i am engulfed with a feeling.

this feeling i am feeling is quite somehow healing.

inst a bad place to be.

sometimes being in the darkness

isn't as lonely

as you'd think it would be.

out of the light

i sit inside the mouth i entered.

i study the motionless movements outside.

and i am utterly deterred.

into the darkness

no one can see my mistakes.

out of the light

my true self shows

without haste.

I would like to change this part:

Into the darkness

"I step out and meet something" <- Shouldnt it be "I step into" since you enter the darkness?

Out of the light

I walk into shadows.

Surrounded by memories,

Rising up from the hallows.

I love that entire part! ^^

Into the darkness

I approach an unseeable creature.

Carefully stepping. one, two,

I see unbelievable features. <- For this part I believe that since you are describing a creature, a word like ghastly instead of unbelievable, it adds a better tone :)

Out of the light

I am engulfed with a feeling. <- Love the use of engulfed :-D

This feeling i am feeling Is quite somehow healing. <- I really love this too

Inst a bad place to be. <- Misspelled isn't :P

Sometimes being in the darkness

Isn't as lonely <- Maybe use isolating? For a stronger use of words.

As you'd think it would be.

Out of the light

I sit inside the mouth I entered. <- Oo love that

I study the motionless movements outside.

And I am utterly deterred.

Into the darkness

No one can see my mistakes.

Out of the light

My true self shows

Without haste.

Good job!!! I really love this :0

answer; ravenna,italy;