Can someone please fix and explain grammar errors I am not sure what I missed thx :)

The mental disorder I have chosen is depression. The reason that I chose this disorder is that it is so common, yet not everyone knows the symptoms or gets proper treatment for it. Medication such as Prestic and Khedezla are serotonin-norepinephrine reuptake inhibitors which are newer medications than selective serotonin reuptake inhibitors. These medications increase the amount of serotonin our body produces which increases how good we feel. Some of the benefits of taking this medication are that your depression is lessened or even eventually gone. the mood changes will be that our happier and less anxious. Common side effects of SNRIs are nausea, dry mouth, dizziness, headaches, and excessive sweating.

I think people often avoid telling people of depression can vary from many different reasons; like they don't feel like they would be treated differently or people worry bout them, another reason may be that since society has an impression of that having depression means you are weak or you have nothing to be sad about. I do not believe that all these people are trying to be mean but instead, I think it is ignorance, I think this because people don't always educate themselves properly they go by what someone has told them in a movie instead of going online and looking at the facts such as It's not the person's fault that they feel this way I could be chemical imbalance like low serotonin. This simple fact of false information is an easy fix with either a simple google search or people raise awareness of it so people don't feel like they are alone. According to healthline. com 16.2 million people in the U. S alone have a depressive episode a year!

Hi!

You missed these few things...

You wrote, "Some of the benefits of taking this medication are that your depression is lessened or even eventually gone"

I would write, One of the many benefits of taking this medication is that your depression is lessened of even eventually gone.

You also wrote, "the mood changes"

You should capitalize the "T" in the word "The" because you started a new sentence.

You wrote, "the mood changes will be that our happier and less anxious"

I would write, You will experience happier and less anxious moods.

Now for the second paragraph you wrote, "I think people often avoid telling people of depression can vary from many different reasons"

I would write, I think people suffering with depression often avoid telling people of their depression because

"I could be chemical imbalance like low serotonin."

It could be chemical imbalance

"simple google search or people raise awareness"

Capitalize the "G" in the word "Google"

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

answer: the gettysburg address is a speech delivered by abraham lincoln at the november 19, 1863, dedication of soldier’s national cemetery, a cemetery for union soldiers killed at the battle of gettysburg during the american civil war.

explanation: